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= = =Wiki Feedback No. 2 for less fortunate children group 14/02/12 -Julie=

Alice’s page Insufficient highlighting Julie Mei’s page NO HIGHLIGHTING

Katie’s research When highlighting, we highlight only key words and phrases not whole sentences.

Monica’s page NO HIGHLIGHTING

Anu’s page Insufficient information

Resource page I don’t understand this.

Where is your primary research page? What is your primary research going to be?

Wiki Feedback for less fortunate children group 03/02/12 -Julie
Hi Less fortunate children group, Looks like you’ve made a good start, although there are some definite gaps that need to be fixed. Some parts of the Wiki are really well done and others need work. I look forward to seeing an improvement as I have high expectations of this group.

Alice Research Great work, well set out and easy to understand. Don’t know what research question this page is answering. Needs a webliography.

Anu’s Research I like that you wrote the concept at the top Where is the question you are answering? Where is the research answering the question?

Concepts page I don’t really understand this page. There are no concepts on it and there seems to be a lot of information missing.

Monica’s Research Research is spelled incorrectly I love the way you explained that you had written it in your own words. Looks to have some great research, but what question are you answering.